Wednesday, May 11, 2016

Eradicated In Selfishness Comments

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Pain and suffering cutting me to the quick, finding and
losing love because of the jealousy and selfishness of
others who claim to love us.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 May 2016

Unique traits of human mind and psychology excellently analysed after their identification during a train travel in south India. I feel that the God, our creator has imbibed love, jealousy, anger, hatred, greed etc 6 enemies(we call it shad ripu) in human mind universally. The percentage may vary depending on geographical and/or economic factors. Regards. Ratnakar Mandlik

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 May 2016

Loving only the ideas they've formed for our lives in their own minds, choosing behaviors conforming to what they see in their jealous minds. I love this stanza. Great idea beneath. Full 10 for it. Thank you for sharing the poem. Subhas

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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