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Erratic Reality

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When the sun merges with the sea,
That’s when my dreams come to me.
When the sky is black as coal,
And the stars aren’t there anymore.
There’s still something,
That gets me gamboling
My dreams, they keep me going
My desires, they keep on growing
But then it suddenly disappears,
& I can no longer see
Now I have to face fears,
Of my erratic reality…
I fantasized another world,
Where no one ever suffered
The drama we imbue,
And everything’s anew
But here comes the ugly truth,
Filled with worries & Ruth
Nothing is going to change,
Those are my dreams that I arrange
And then it suddenly disappears,
& I can no longer see
Now I have to face fears,
Of my erratic reality…
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COMMENTS
Anoushka Sinha 03 February 2014
thnx a lot for ur appreciation Ed, i would keep dat in my mind.. v useful advice :)
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Anoushka Sinha 03 February 2014
thnxx a lot saDvansha :)
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S M 03 February 2014
there is no h: aftr d in my NAME /! ! ! : P
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Anoushka Sinha 03 February 2014
thnxx so much geetha ma'm, i feel so good dat u connected to my thoughts.. i too feel connection to sm of ur poems.. truly moving..
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Anoushka Sinha 03 February 2014
thnxx shradhha.. :) i read ur poems i totally agree wid ur thoughts about equal gender n girl child well i dont usually read hindi poems but urswr truly touching! ! [3
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S M 01 February 2014
Best one till now.! ! :)
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Shraddha The Poetess 31 January 2014
a nice poem.................. well done.. i also invite u to read mine
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Geetha Jayakumar 31 January 2014
Beautiful poem. Very true said, life plays hide and seek with us. It give us hope sometimes while it take away that too. Loved reading it.
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