Error Involving Jazz Poem by Landrey

Error Involving Jazz

Rating: 4.3


yes, all evening long,
I was missing you.
no, don't get me wrong,
I was moving too.
yes, not here but there,
I saw you no more.
no, don't say you care,
I saw you. I'm poor.

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Jonzo Bandwagoner 14 March 2007

Ah, the sequel! Was wondering if one would be appear... hehe. I really like the form for these poems, it's rather unique and it carries with it a 'basic complexity.' (a phrase which, if used anywhere else, would mean absolutely nothing but always sounds good) Keep up the writing.

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