Esteemed Treasure Poem by Akshita Bindal

Esteemed Treasure

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There were fire fumes like fraction of time
There were crimson gold flowing rivers actions of thine

On sand dunes of dessert-ed hill
There was a land of wood timber sobbing white frills

That was a place unknown yet known
It was vista cologne of bloodstone

Sunday, May 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: art,fire,flow,landscape ,love,time,unknown
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem talks about vivid imagery of time which has an element of fire as well as water as river flows are golden in colour. there is a contrast of dessert and snowflakes, an opposition of love and hate and how the war left the blod stone. It has got a romantic touch for a place which was unknown yet known. It is an open poem which contains ample amount of perspectives. You are free to imagine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 03 June 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Akshita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Ravishu goyal 28 May 2018

Very nice poem......

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yoonoos peerbocus 27 May 2018

like the whole stuff/finely penned

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