Rebecca .C.

Rookie - 1 Points (july 26,1994)

Eternity. - Poem by Rebecca .C.

She slowly walks
Toward him
Flowers below her feet
Goosebumps on her skin
Walking towards the place
They agreed to meet
Music playing
All around them
They can't take their eyes away
From one another
Her;
A vision of white,
A beautiful sight
Him;
A black tux
she loves him so much
She takes one step
After the other
Concentrating on not to trip
Walking to the
Love of her life
After what seems like forever
She takes his hand
And says don't let go
He replies never
The priest unites them together
They whisper I do
Forever and ever
Even when time is through
Then they kiss
Officially Mr. and Mrs.
Finally feeling complete
Together
They will always be
Never letting go
For all of eternity.


Comments about Eternity. by Rebecca .C.

  • (7/15/2013 1:33:00 AM)


    A fairytale wedding, no doubt.Nice write. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (4/26/2012 11:09:00 AM)


    Like a fairytale it is nice and soothing reading! but i prefer no censor word in poetry like this coz no such words for lovely fairytale story, hahahaha Nice write_Unwritten soul (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2012 12:26:00 PM)


    Great i like this one, enticing (Report) Reply

  • Sharad Juneja (4/23/2012)


    A perfect love story..........nice one (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 22, 2012


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