Evening's Kiss Poem by elysabeth faslund

Evening's Kiss

Rating: 5.0


In the Evening, sounds get
Softer, until there's a hush
Which settles as powder
Snow would...leaving the
Earth almost velvet, gentle,
Soothing the last, worn,
Tiredness...
'I'm almost home...almost
There.'
Felt by man, animal, alike.
Evenings are not the end
Of the day...just a breathing
Of kindness, a faint kiss on
Cheeks.
You look around...no one
There.
Oh, there was something
There...it was Evening's
Kiss...until you meet again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fred Babbin 01 December 2007

A wonderful way of thinking about the subject. It gives me a whole new outlook. I like that. After I sent you my recommendations about what to do with PoemHunter, I got through pretty quick. Do you think they really read that stuff?

0 0 Reply
Ivan Donn Carswell 29 November 2007

Decidely sweet & a grand companion for your Morning verse... Rgds, Ivan

0 0 Reply
H. Chesebit 29 November 2007

Very nice Elysabeth and it sets nicely agianst your morning piece.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
586 / 402
elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
Close
Error Success