every way we turn
we want to do our thing
we balk at yielding
to a God
and the Higher Plan
in the end
we’re forced to see
something others knew
our frailties are here to stay
it’s time to adjust our view
Just perfect. The beginning lines and the end lines just complete the poem into a great message.10+
Just perfect. I like the simplicity and the beginning lines ushering the conclusion at the end. Very effective and well written poem.10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lesson learned...so true. Good one, Robyn.