Everyone's A Critic. Poem by Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.

Everyone's A Critic.

Rating: 4.6


I wear them with pride
the scars on my sins,

the memories
that have led
me to this place
in time.

And I could tell you
all my stories
but you'd
never believe
them

which would
leave me
feeling
as if I was
just trying
to justify
myself to you.

(Trust me,
that's the last thing
on my mind)

So that leaves me
with one option

and this piece
of wisdom
you can have
for free.

Those who can, do.
Those who can't, criticize.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Russell 02 July 2006

I see all the 'very true' and 'wise words' comments have already been made. Hmmm.....Exactly. And Spot On. Howzat? Hugs Anna xxx

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NEIL...WISE WORDS OF TRUTH, AND IF THOSE WHO WERE THE OFFENDERS ONLY KNEW THAT THEY WERE...WHAT A WONDERFUL WPRLD THIS WOULD BE...ASTUTE PENNING'''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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***** ********* 22 June 2006

So so true Neil, no crit to offer at all! lol Grinning at you, Tai

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Brian Dorn 22 June 2006

Neil, very wise words... statement well made. Nice job! ! Brian

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Nalini Hebbar 22 June 2006

very true...the end bang on...nalini

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