Excited Poem by Christina Phan

Excited

Rating: 5.0


Excited
Mean to me is
Ready to get something
I been waiting for
Like my permit or CD/DVD/Phone

Excited
Is one thing
I don't keep
Doing because
It's go to turn into bad luck

Excited
On the other hand
When I want something so bad it can happen
All I have to do is be patient and
It can be a good thing

Excited
Can mean so much
Like getting this feeling
When you are with someone you love so much
You just can't stop feeling like that

Excited
Is expressed on my face of how I
Feel right now
I just want to let it out and
Be crazy
Excited

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 16 July 2009

said the truth of excitement beautifully! 10+

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TRUE...A FANTASTIC FEELING IT IS

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Vijay Sai R 14 July 2009

youthful exuberance...exciting!

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very well said, we need that feeeling which left up little in our daily life..beautiful thoughts

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

San Jose, Califorina
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