Excommunication Poem by Seyed Morteza Hamidzadeh

Excommunication

Rating: 4.8


Everyone would have abandoned you,
but an executed Angel in your heart,
who sent out the resurrection of her brain
to the slaughtering field of the Trumpeters,
and the duel-declaration of two eyes,
with the edge of your breathing
which challenged the world of your ears.

Oh, philosophical nightmares of mine!
My lips lack the ability to move.

I wish for setting myself ablaze,
as do the meteors entering the atmosphere.

O' religions of the world,
enunciate the decree of my excommunication
and allow the shepherds breathe with ease.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 23 September 2013

Oh, philosophical nightmares of mine! My lips lack the ability to move. An exclusive beautiful write.

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Luna Michaelis 19 September 2013

The first stanza was awesome.

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Zoya Khalid 13 June 2012

first four lines very well written......a good piece of writing.

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Kasia Fedyk 03 June 2012

I love your poem Seyed, its beautifully written, yes allow them to breath. One breath, one life. Thank you!

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Eric Cockrell 13 May 2012

your spirit rises above the religions of the world, seeking freedom. very good poem.

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