Believed in love all my life, not just an ordinary love but one that can not come close to words, something magical, felt as if God came down and showed me how to love, to truly feel the essence and meaning of the word.
As a child even though pain comes knocking down I thrived on seeing others happy, it gave me something inside I will never forge ...
You may be in the sunshine state; I am not your son. Don't ever contact me!
sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.
A beautiful sight is a beautiful poem with something distinctly original in its style, I think Kasia you have a great future ahead with your style and bold direction, well done.
Hi Kasia, A Different Approach, good work and something I like to do too, at least I know what I'm talking about lol, nice writing lets have lots more.
Love is in communion with ur soul.Grace adorns ur inspiration like a bridal robe.
A Beautiful Sight
A Beautiful sight, I've seen it once.
In a lonely white room
with a bed and a small chair,
table on three feet in a corner holding a bouquet
fortifying the air with the scent of roses
window, a small, round window
in the middle of the pale wall,
exposing messages from up above
in a form of snowflakes, falling so slowly,
a white dove sat on the ledge.
A man was fighting for his life
machine pumping air into his lungs
in a constant steady motion.
~A beautiful sight
Angel wings spread across the bed
hovering over the mans body, healing it,
feeding his soul
with heavenly aroma,
the smiling Angel kissed his forehead
and told me it will be back tomorrow.
A beautiful sight.
And love is born is a lovely conclusion to Can you Feel me? I can. Can you feel me? love Gershon