Dutendra Chamling
Khotang, Nepal
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Existence

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Until the sky remains blue
Think, I am still not dead.
Like you, I had seen the sky in blue colour.
Until my thought about the sky has not changed.
Until my thought is not wrong.
Think, I am still not dead.

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Wednesday, April 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: change,existence,identity,politics,revolution ,social,thought
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 10 February 2017
An insightful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. A beautiful poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing and do remain blesse.
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Nosheen Irfan 22 July 2016
Yes, until the sky remains blue, there is hope. As long as we can see good in everything, and stay positive, we will be alive. A lovely write with social, and political connotations. It also touches upon the theme of identity crisis. A significant piece.
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Jr Gr 28 April 2016
Until the sky remains blue Think, I am still not dead. Like you, I had seen the sky in blue colour. Until my thought about the sky has not changed Until my thought about the sky has not changed. Think, I am still not dead. ......This poem promotes thought. Thank you. I.e. no blue sky = death! What is death? Death = no blue sky. Blue sky is only visible in our atmosphere. Therefore death is atmospheric? Or death is earthly? To Not 'see' the blue sky is still to see. What meaning? Are We in/on another plane. What if life is a dream etc. etc. ecterra...
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