Your eyes twinkled through the pain
Your smile still somewhat bright
I sensed a growing distance between us
Clutching your hand as day turned into night
Trying to hold back my tears
Your love like a river overflowing
I could feel it
Deep within my heart
My eyes were glistening
My lips quivering
On the inside my heart felt
Twisted and torn
I struggled with letting you go
As your life's light slowly flickered
To just a dim, barely visible glow
Casting shadows across your face
Suddenly you were far away
Reaching out to me
From a far away place
Swept away into grief
I was praying and crying
I died a thousand deaths
Watching you as you lay dying
Well penning here..so great and honest. i agree with your fragrant words
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Swimming in the sea of sadness. Losing a loved one is one of the most painful blows that life hit us. Full of feeling from the heart. Well done my friend!