I honestly feel like
I'm losing my mind
Without you
As time keeps on passing
I'm falling behind
The world is unclear
I can't focus
As if I'm going blind
I'm constantly searching
For what I can't find
I honestly feel like
I'm losing my mind
Without You.
Dear Erica, The deep feelings of true love are clearly reflected here. Nice poem. Thanks and please reply
A Very nice expression of the state of mind. Behind these few liners a long and heavy amt. sorrows are hidden, what I can smell and realize. I only can keep my loving hands on your shoulder.
That loss, or gain, is the only way I can write. Otherwise I completely lack inspiration. Anyway beautiful poem that a lot of us relate. :)
These are natural feelings- that haunt you when you are without the person you love, lean on and look for inspiration. A well written poem.9/10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A tantalizing trumpet that that's loaded with a loneliness that pulls and grips with passion. Well done my friend!