Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 799,989 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Express Loss - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

How can you grieve and express loss?
Do you cry loud think or choose?
Stay in corner and get lost in memory
Stay with gloomy face under deep worry

God needs them most in His Courtroom
Where as there was no dearth for others with room
Person may be precious like fine star in the sky
Shined for few hours and immediately chosen to fly

We feel world as hollow
We think sun may not shine tomorrow
Nights may be all worthless
We may have lot many problems to chase

Such might have been the dominant position
The loss caused to family is sudden imposition
Family may take some time to adjust the shock
They have yet to come out of it to take the stock

Even though we are aware of uncertainty
We leave it to good wisdom of almighty
It is natural to shed a tear over loss
We follow the natural and consider it as divine cause

Think of no control on life span
Human beings might have made lots of plans
Nobody would have preferred quitting of their own
So almighty has taken control in hand and made it known

We attribute untimely death as decided by destiny
Some of us may not reconcile or come to terms fully
Yet the helplessness is openly seen on the face
Life has been termed as adventurous but as uncertain race

So always we talk of great wisdom
Raise hands in disgust cry foul seldom
Somewhere we realize its futility
Suddenly come down to terms as inability

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2011 9:02:00 AM)

    Kavitha Rani heart rending poem..Hasmukh Amathalal Ji..I read a similar poem of ancient times about death..let me try a crude translation.. 'Even if u cry for years, can ever a dead can come? you people of a great land..we r also supposed to go on the same way..till then just stay away from ur concern. about an hour ago · Unlike · 2 people (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2011 9:02:00 AM)

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    Panigrahi Sudam Nice description of the despondence time. about an hour ago · Like
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 4, 2011


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