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02 March 2009
Eyes Full of Tears
The beauty of my love
Will shine in your heart
The love that I served
Will ring in your nerves
It will fire with time?
Love that is mine
You will demand the same
And will not find again
You will stretch
The moments left
The images in brain
The beauty we gained
Memories will be grown
The faults that ever been
Shall turn into stones
Time will leave you alone
A change in life
People will realize
The love that I did
Was pure and nice
You will see there
The image in clear
In a broken mirror
Eyes full of tears
Eyes full of tears
'The love that I served Will ring in your nerves' Beautiful The ability to say much without using many words is a gift, use it more. Thanks for sharing 10+
Good work Aarif.... keep this pen pumpin' shabaash
hey...this is really sad..wow, i hope this isn't true...very deep..i felt it..it just got to me, vry well written...keep it up~
Eyes Full of Tears..... no sheeding of tears and it should never roll out from eyes.....beaitiful write dear.. kaka in hindi belt is father's borther. in punjabi it is for small boy.. I, yur grand uncle so kaka is appropriate even in my language... hahahah read mine 'cry not' and comment me back.... reagards and love
this is really a good write., the sequence of lines are properly arranged..beautiful...grace
mirror is refection of correct things. i hve poem titles'cry not' in this hunter poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is life...don't mind but go on to next poem...10+