Lizzy Tomlinson

Rookie (Dundee, Scotland.)

Face. - Poem by Lizzy Tomlinson

Looking in the mirror,
What's that, that I see?
Oh, bloody hell, it is my face,
That's staring back at me.
Two blue eyes, now dulling,
Some wrinkles and crows feet,
(Or might they pass as laughter lines) ,
To people that I meet.
Looking in the mirror,
My face, I wish, was yours,
Then I'd look like some~one different,
When I venture out of doors.


Comments about Face. by Lizzy Tomlinson

  • (5/6/2006 7:33:00 AM)


    Absolutely wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. If you wonder what you look like, ask the people that love you. They see you as you truly are!

    Peace,
    Aisha
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  • (4/18/2006 7:09:00 AM)


    Nice Poem Lizzy darling, but I think your face you should keep, a couple of wrinkles are life little marks, shows you have lived Lizzy, have FUN dave xxxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, April 24, 2006


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