Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Fail Each Time - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

This is where we fail each time
Take solace by confessing sometimes
what do we miss from real heart?
Just to lift the leave and have good start

why should we worry and pray?
As all our life had been waste and did not stay
to the ideals of almighty and kept in captivity
now is the time to assert alone and not to show any inability

I refuse to be drawn in selfish struggle
Lt that put me in any kind of trouble
Prayers are not meant for addressing concerns
Thy got to be tackled and proven in turn

Man may commit error
Murder the people and create terror
He may simple go in and confess the crime
Ask for solace and peace in bad time

Why are we so self oriented?
Why do we remain away from reality and unrelated?
He is medium for us to come to the rescue
But what are we suppose to do?

There can be no excuse for such mentality
Certain faults can be waved because of inability
But with bad intention if something is performed
Person himself is responsible and needs to be reformed


Comments about Fail Each Time by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 6:13:00 AM)


    well covered


    Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao7 hours ago
    poem is well related
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    good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 6:12:00 AM)


    drkgbalakrishnan kandangath7 hours ago
    good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2012 10:37:00 PM)


    This is where we fail each time
    Take solace by confessing sometimes
    what do we miss from real heart?
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 24, 2012


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