Failed Love Poem by Dan Jensen

Failed Love

Rating: 5.0


We did not agree..
At that, we should see..
Fit with each other, we knew..
But our love withdrew.

Every night I cried..
Laying on my bed, I knew I tried..
Giving up I did..
For this, I was not fit.

I missed him more then anything..
Even suicide was tempting..
I looked out the window, at the broken moon..
Without you, there's no fortune.

I hid my face in my pillow..
Breaking to pieces, was my window..
My house falling apart..
Without you, I'm nothing, sweetheart.

My world falling apart..
Please, push restart..
I am nothing without you..
What am I to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 27 September 2008

go closer to be heard to share beauty of borg look in her eyes with passion showing that you have noble intention you can't turn the windmill without a wind believe it or not you are it, my friend thanks for sharing your soon to be passionate poems.md

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