kulit ...

Failure? ?

failures? ? ?
who are they? ?
can i classify myself as one of them?
yes, i fail, i maybe fail million times,
and even more than a million in my lifetime..
But i disagree to be called as a failure..
I maybe failed, stumbled down but i never forget to get up again..
i never forget to fight,
i never lose the strenght and courage
and believe that one day i will reach my goal..
that one day all that mistakes will never done again..
i believe that mistakes can never be corrected
but we can learn to never done it again..

eveybody fails..
everybody stumble..
but not everybody knows how to stand again..
we can never be a failure..
unless we stop, stay down, and declared ourselves as a failure..

so rise up..
fight, stand, never forget to live..
never let yourself to be attached to that single failure..
never let that single failure ruin your life...

so stand up and say..
I'M NOT A FAILURE, I JUST FAILED NOW....
i will continue my life, because continuing my life after a failure is a big SUCCESS...and i know I will be successful sooner or later..
I know i deserve the success...

Poem Submitted: Monday, August 24, 2009

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Comments about Failure? ? by kulit ...

  • Anthony Degilio (9/23/2009 7:25:00 AM)

    Yes needs to be edited a bit, but the structure is nice! good poem.

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  • Zachary Clark (9/19/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    Good poem needs to be edited badly. The form needs to be given strong structure and it is a bad grammar ridden thing full of typos and such. Though you are only 14 so you have time to work on it. I am 16 and still working on it.

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  • M Im (9/18/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    This is a great poem, with lots of truth.

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (9/18/2009 12:46:00 AM)

    Many times I have failed that it would take so many page to describe all of them in detail, however, I have learned my lessons the hard and painful ways, and I prevailed, great poem, my friend, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

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  • Luke Easter (9/17/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    Proverbs 18: 21 never say what you are not.

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  • sara }i{ (9/17/2009 6:14:00 PM)

    yes u r right......i wish all the people think like you
    great poem

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  • Kasthuri Velu (9/17/2009 9:42:00 AM)

    The poem is absolutely great.

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  • Riekairu Calo (9/17/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    totoo....i agree..naka relate aq ahaha

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  • Ken E Hall (9/17/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    yes you have the right attitude to succeed and now at your age you should have a yearning for learning full on and keep writing
    regards

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  • Joseph Poewhit (9/17/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    Failure is a success in itself in having just tried.

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  • Qualisa Thomas (9/17/2009 4:57:00 AM)

    i love this poem it made me think about myself a lot thanks for writing this

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  • Mimi Brown (9/17/2009 12:11:00 AM)

    Good concept with powerful intent. What started as a personal question turned into a universal appeal. Keep the faith, , , keep writing.

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  • Jake Andrews (9/16/2009 11:14:00 PM)

    faliure is in the mind, failure is a way to get better, fail a hundred times and you will be better in the end than the person who got it right the first time

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  • Merna Ibrahim (9/16/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    Ye i agree that it's a good optimistic poem! ! ..
    Contains strong messages too.thanks for sharing.
    I hope you take a look on my poems...10
    Merna

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  • Ronn Michael SalinasRonn Michael Salinas (9/3/2009 7:29:00 PM)

    Very optimistic. True, lots of people do need some optimism. Good poem.

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (9/1/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    very inspiring...
    with optimistic outlook
    interesting to read
    great concept on this...
    .....on survival in life...
    great piece, indeed
    thanks for sharing
    10

    Lovelots,

    Maia

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