Failure? ? Poem by kulit ...

Failure? ?

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failures? ? ?
who are they? ?
can i classify myself as one of them?
yes, i fail, i maybe fail million times,
and even more than a million in my lifetime..
But i disagree to be called as a failure..
I maybe failed, stumbled down but i never forget to get up again..
i never forget to fight,
i never lose the strenght and courage
and believe that one day i will reach my goal..
that one day all that mistakes will never done again..
i believe that mistakes can never be corrected
but we can learn to never done it again..

eveybody fails..
everybody stumble..
but not everybody knows how to stand again..
we can never be a failure..
unless we stop, stay down, and declared ourselves as a failure..

so rise up..
fight, stand, never forget to live..
never let yourself to be attached to that single failure..
never let that single failure ruin your life...

so stand up and say..
I'M NOT A FAILURE, I JUST FAILED NOW....
i will continue my life, because continuing my life after a failure is a big SUCCESS...and i know I will be successful sooner or later..
I know i deserve the success...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronn Michael Salinas 03 September 2009

Very optimistic. True, lots of people do need some optimism. Good poem.

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Merna Ibrahim 16 September 2009

Ye i agree that it's a good optimistic poem! ! .. Contains strong messages too.thanks for sharing. I hope you take a look on my poems...10 Merna

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Jake Andrews 16 September 2009

faliure is in the mind, failure is a way to get better, fail a hundred times and you will be better in the end than the person who got it right the first time

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Mimi Brown 17 September 2009

Good concept with powerful intent. What started as a personal question turned into a universal appeal. Keep the faith, , , keep writing.

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Qualisa Thomas 17 September 2009

i love this poem it made me think about myself a lot thanks for writing this

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Anthony Degilio 23 September 2009

Yes needs to be edited a bit, but the structure is nice! good poem.

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Zachary Clark 19 September 2009

Good poem needs to be edited badly. The form needs to be given strong structure and it is a bad grammar ridden thing full of typos and such. Though you are only 14 so you have time to work on it. I am 16 and still working on it.

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M Im 18 September 2009

This is a great poem, with lots of truth.

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Romeo Della Valle 18 September 2009

Many times I have failed that it would take so many page to describe all of them in detail, however, I have learned my lessons the hard and painful ways, and I prevailed, great poem, my friend, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Luke Easter 17 September 2009

Proverbs 18: 21 never say what you are not.

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