Sunday, May 21, 2017

Fairies Realm Comments

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Still, the wind carries the song from fairy's land -
That, I can hear sometime at midnight;
A melody of frolic folk through the clock of sand -
When, white moon reflects its celestial light;
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Jefferson Carter 21 May 2017

Dhiraj, couple of nice images here (bar of hill, blond and low) , but the scrambled syntax of some sentences is really disconcerting. As you become more and more proficient in English, you should also immerse yourself in good contemporary poetry in English.That will help you improve as a poet (if that's a goal) . If you're interested, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. YRs, JC

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Dhiraj Das

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