-you’ve blinded my heart
-you made my feelings ocean full your jar from the tap of my heart
-the river of my tears got down to my checks to grave down the history of that broken heart
-started hiring guards at the openings of my ears, the doors of my eyes
so no lies, no fake contact of your eyes got through to my heart before shaking down in the
thinking tour through my brain
-you wont grab my heart, my soul is all mine
-no controling of my life no more
-i’m hearing guards of my eyes closing there doors
-i’m stornger now and i won’t cry any more
-im the owner, the queen of my life
By: Hala Hash.
that was a meaningful poem, and like the way you wrote..so will give you a true ten
fake no more ....... where you are the queen........... well penned.......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the river of my tears got down to my checks to grave down the history of that broken heart its a good line..the whole piece of writing is better one..but if was done in poetic way that could have been better... I prefer if you redo in poem form..the idea is really catchy... appreciate your talent and no doubbt you are talented enough... and committed to your words too..10+++++++++++