Free Me.. Poem by Hala Hash.

Free Me..

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Free Me, God Free Me
From all those who gyve me'

Each one place their cable around his limbs
they want him always available to be..and away never to be

They aren't just 4 gyves
See that limb, there are hundreds on each

But he's not giving up, he's not a slave, and that what he's not planin to be

When it comes to where all pull from their sides, he wishes to die and life to leave

He refuses to cry
Over that he prefers to die

He wants to be set free
And away for his 1st time to be

With them pulling, he'll lose peices and parts of him
& hard to return them for him gana be




By: Hala Hash

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazem Al Jaber 02 July 2009

nice one, , but you can give more better.. because you ahve a warm feelings taht you can get more what you hide inside.. keep on.. hazem al

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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009

good poem, well done

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~ Jon London ~ 22 June 2009

Very deep in expression, yet the voice is so gentle....very well written...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 June 2009

' free meeeeee....why don't you freeee me.......free me from your spellll.......' Excellent writes!

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