Conflict... Poem by Hala Hash.

Conflict...

Rating: 4.7


My tears are droping inside..

I think,
is it me who should decide?

Remain thinking, 'me or you', all night..

Inside...
I can hear a huge fight..

I see nothing..
It's dark..
I see no light..

I try to make the problems i get out of all that so light..

But what about all that..
What about the tears of the night..

What about the cuts in their hearts..
What about the conflect i live inside..

What about great people im losing, trying to make What u think is right..

I donno how..
I donno why..
I donno without making you sad how to decide...

That's why i dropp decision most of the time to your side..

But now..
It's hard, people to hurt to keep you satisfied..

And I want to keep both happy..
But why should i? it's much that i've tried..

It's the time..
The time of seeing things from my side..


By Hala Hash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Abdullah 23 June 2009

Love the lines..... Expressing..... every one of us got a conflict deep inside.....I guess that adds to the individuality of each....

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Afzal Shauq 20 June 2009

But now.. It's hard, people to hurt to keep you satisfied.. And I want to keep both happy.. But why should i? it's much that i've tried.. It's the time.. The time of seeing things from my side.. good lines of the rich poem..and lovely written.. hope you will write more... well done... liked your poetry..10++++++

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Alex Lewis 19 June 2009

Being honest, I wish I could write as good as you. Your ending was like the perfect cherry atop a Sundae.

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soft thoughts despite that conflict where there is a tril to decide....well penned, your words let me miss jordan mainly te airport that connection point....thanks

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