Fall Of A Sparrow Comments

Ah...awesome imagery. That poor frightened little bird and your frightened heart will be forever inside my head. You bring it so...vividly to life and the whole scene just presents itself to the mind in graphic detail as well as detailing a state of mind. Powerful suff indeed - I am impressed by such a conjuration of words and the power of their images. Breathtaking and beautiful in equal amounts! Love it! Gina XXX

Awesome wording... Scarlett speaks of the beating heart and you can feel it within this piece.

Funny, I can almost feel the frantic beating of its heart, the wild fear, the panic, the trying to escape....being trapped!