Falling! ! !
Down,
Very heavy!
Because of your weight;
But, not everybody's hands can catch you.
Nice poetic expression. Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing.
A mortal that a man is, he falls, but he has to rise on his own. Even a man of good intention cannot lift him up. Well said.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very heavy! ! Facing the ways of love and life along the line. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.