Falling From My Peak Poem by Just a Boy

Falling From My Peak

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Reaching my peak
Souls growing weak
feeling the need to retreat
battling with accepting defeat
try not to weep
in way to deep
as i eat away
minds in the state of decay
with these pains
being covered by beautiful danes
so far gone
my heart years before I pawned
All i want is a sense of peace
yet in this world that feelings deceased
just a little satisfaction
instead constant retraction
as the wondering mind might find this to be a ramble
to specific eyes they realize its a gamble
in the previous past
these thoughts would of been last
and if not last then lost
but at what toll what cost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 26 August 2012

Outburst of the heart! Wow! I know the feeling! Many times I felt like that but thank God I found the ways to stay afloat and moved on! In a few poems I posted I clearly described such experienced events in my life! Just keep strong and going! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! I admire your poetic talent! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City!

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