Just a Boy

Rookie (San Diego)

Falling From My Peak - Poem by Just a Boy

Reaching my peak
Souls growing weak
feeling the need to retreat
battling with accepting defeat
try not to weep
in way to deep
as i eat away
minds in the state of decay
with these pains
being covered by beautiful danes
so far gone
my heart years before I pawned
All i want is a sense of peace
yet in this world that feelings deceased
just a little satisfaction
instead constant retraction
as the wondering mind might find this to be a ramble
to specific eyes they realize its a gamble
in the previous past
these thoughts would of been last
and if not last then lost
but at what toll what cost

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  • Romeo Della Valle (8/26/2012 1:21:00 PM)


    Outburst of the heart! Wow! I know the feeling! Many times I felt like that but thank God I found the ways to stay afloat and moved on! In a few poems I posted I clearly described such experienced events in my life! Just keep strong and going! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! I admire your poetic talent! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012



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