Jayson C


False Hope - Poem by Jayson C

Sorry for being sweet
From the way I act
And from the way I speak
I think we need to stop
Before we both fall in deep

I may have said too much
I may have done things
Are we in a rush?
Shall we see what this brings?

I can't promise you bliss
Nor promise no pain
I may be calm like seas
But I can be rough like the rain

I appreciate what you did
And how you made me feel
But let's stop and just stay still
before we start something unclear

Topic(s) of this poem: sad, sad love


Comments about False Hope by Jayson C

  • (1/1/2016 5:49:00 AM)


    ooopppps nag-aa-lin-langan yata aH.... manigong bagong taon..husay (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/4/2015 10:53:00 PM)


    Verily, a lovely verse with simile and antithesis...10 (Report) Reply

    Jayson C (11/5/2015 8:19:00 AM)

    thanks!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 20, 2016


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