Falling Poem by Jayson C

Falling

Rating: 5.0


My mind is getting blurry.
Suddenly your name pitched in.
My heart beats in a hurry,
So is my adrenaline.

The reason why I'm awake at night.
The reason why I can't sleep
I know this might not be right.
It's a thought I shouldn't keep.

It started slow but became a habit
Its like I'm on a slide so steep
Should I take the chance and grab it,
Or should I just let it slip?

Its been hours and I'm still awake
Thinking of you and what's at stake.
Will it worth the risk that I should take,
Or we'll end up both as a big mistake.

Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,fear,hope,love,sleeping
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Part of my 'Insomniac Thoughts' Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 01 January 2016

talaban kaya siya? ? ? ... mahusay pagkabuo

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jhobelle castillo 02 October 2015

Hugot na hugot. 👏👏

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2015

Very amazing poem shared really....10

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Jayson C 02 October 2015

thank you! please do read and comment on my other poems as well.

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