Fantasticness Poem by Vi Lanflagle

Fantasticness

Rating: 5.0


Flight to the moon;
Stars close enough just reach out and touch.
I'll catch one
And bring it back just for you.

Dive into the seas;
Ride with the dolphins.
I'll talk to them
And tell you everything they say.

I'll do anything
Just to see your face all lit up.
Throwing me a grin
While talking all over the place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 10 September 2007

The title is great Violetta. I love the way that you have worked the narrative in this. It speaks of passion and a yearning for the best. A great poem, I like it a lot.

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Working Title 09 September 2007

I have no clue what this poem is about, but I like it! :)

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