Saturday, March 26, 2011

Fantasy Azalea Comments

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O azalea!
Heart lies in deepest sea!
Hope lies in greatest sky!
How caravan would rather be in valley
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Jenny Gordon 01 April 2011

Ah, how I wish I was familiar with the beautiful flowers you've chosen for your delightful religious fantasies! The problem is that the 'loving Mother' is a lie. God alone gives man salvation by Himself, through the Lord Jesus Christ alone. It is a beautiful fantasy, with delightful imagery. Unfortunately the beautiful tantalizing butterfly represents evil, for butterflies are so very beautifully delicate and flit so alluringly, I wish it might represent only good, but that is only my preference. Beautiful and fascinating, loaded with meaning, which I've only half understood, if at all.

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Mohammed Albalushi 30 March 2011

really amazing poem i like it, u know how to use words to express it in wonderful way

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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