Fantasy Land Poem by Ana Sanchez

Fantasy Land

Rating: 5.0


I see the palm tree's breezing through the air. The ocean's wave rushing through my veins. The sunshine's so bright. The seagulls gulping away, whatever's left in the sea, but in my vision all I see is you and me indulging every moment, capturing each kiss in a glance. The way your fingers curl around my back. It makes me think of the time we danced had a blast. I could stare at your eyes forever. It's like being in paradise with a drink.

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Ted M 13 August 2009

The feelings are very nicely expressed in a lovely poetic manner......10+++

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Ana Sanchez

Ana Sanchez

Dominican Republic
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