Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Far From City Rush - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is small village and far from city rush
Greenery all around and spread with bushes
Tall trees speak of strong roots with old existence
I came to realize my childhood at once

It has narrow path with dusty lanes
Big doors and open window panes
The air freely enter with so much dust
The village and nature is bonded with trust

I look round street but did not find her
She used to stay near by or somewhere
But I had long association to miss at once
She was almost there in house in my presence

I don’t know how did it happen?
She had not passed a word or confided even
It was her feeling and attachment
I was unaware and unmoved with her movement

We may spend hours together in lawn
Sit very close till the sun was dawn
Nature and innocence did not disappoint us
As we had enough of confidence and trust

We not only shared deep sentiment
But also exchanged happy moments
We had many things in common
We were neighbor and very good companion

I would never dare to offend and hurt
She may be almost in tears if I ever tried to flirt
Though we did cross our limit and stayed as friends
We had to depart as sad souls at the end

She had approached me with clear mind for sure
She had seen in me true lover of very kind nature
She was very much confident of getting my nod
I could not think of her even if was permitted by God

I was deeply attached but wanted only deep bond
As I was very much impressed, keen and fond
I wanted her to remain my well wisher and true ally
I thought of joining her as impracticable and complete folly

There are some moments which can not be shared
They are sacred promises and completely adhered to
I did not want to loose her from permanent association
Alas! I could do it for the sake of maintaining relation


Comments about Far From City Rush by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (5/1/2011 8:47:00 AM)


    very relaxing love story. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/1/2011 8:29:00 AM)


    There are some moments which can not be shared
    They are sacred promises and completely adhered to
    I did not want to loose her from permanent association
    Alas! I could do it for the sake of maintaining relation
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 5, 2011


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