James S.


Far Too Deep

Poem by James S.

Always thought I was lucky
Havin' you holding on, when your blue
But now that things are yucky
Not so sure that was always true

Remember when we thought
We were so much better?
Then those who faught
And we had never?

Summer days wished last forever
Break of dawn, until we sleep
Why this feeling must we sever?
When did things become so steep?

I lay motionless in my bed
Without you it's not the same
Thoughts of you run through my head
I whisper to myself your name

The truth is, I miss you near
Your laugh and your twitch
That smile from ear to ear
This wound is far too deep to stitch

This wound is far too deep to stitch


Comments about Far Too Deep by James S.

  • Kee Thampi (7/17/2006 11:59:00 PM)

    Summer days wished last forever
    Break of dawn, until we sleep
    Why this feeling must we sever?
    When did things become so steep?

    my words on this poem is -very poetic- open the window of mind into words of a poem(Report)Reply

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  • Dark Skyz (are clearing up) (7/17/2006 1:23:00 PM)

    i love it...i kno wat it feels like!

    tori(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 17, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 17, 2010