James S.

Nice Guy

Poem by James S.

I haven't given up
Even though it's been so long
I thought we were perfect
But i guess i was wrong

You used to be my angel
But now your a lush
Hooking up with guys
Without even a crush

I haven't given up hope
This isnt the end of our glory
We'll be the talk again
Like a new hollywood story

I know it deep down inside
Someday i can be your shoulder
Though after these mistakes
You'll have to be much older

I tell you i love you
You tell me a lie
Tell me when you see it plain
Why not I, the nice guy?

Comments about Nice Guy by James S.

  • Lesa K (7/8/2006 3:57:00 PM)

    This one speaks of so much honesty and feelings from the heart. You do a great job of expressing your true feeling and emotion in your poetry. As Francesca said, I think the display of forgiveness and unselfishness makes this a very unique write. I can't wait to see more of your poetry!(Report)Reply

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  • Francesca Johnson (7/8/2006 1:59:00 AM)

    A poem which oozes love, support, unselfishness, forgiveness and understanding. A positive poem to start my day off. A nice read, John, thank you.

    Love, Fran xx(Report)Reply

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  • Abigail Keller (7/7/2006 9:52:00 PM)

    Stunning write.
    The second stanza was my favorite but the whole poem was quite good.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 7, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 13, 2010