Fate Poem by Elijah Timothy

Fate

Rating: 5.0


FATE
Into the Abyss of insanity
I sank in the anxiety
Of my youthful bliss
With thoughts only for the unknown.

Wishing I could get a glance
Of the future and know
The paramount of me today's toils.

Unknown I have known you
All my known life
I strive to meet you
I strive to please you
I strive to make you
A better person but still
What will be, will be
For our today decisions
Are our fated tomorrows

Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: insanity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Adie 01 September 2018

Highly philosophical. you should write more. Thanks for sharing,

0 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Elijah. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 30 August 2018

Well thought out and nicely penned with conviction. A beautiful creation.

0 0 Reply
Elijah Timothy 30 August 2018

thank you very much Chinedu Dike

0 0
Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2018

Unknown I have known you All my known life I strive to meet you I strive to please you..........our decisions now are the fate of tomorrow, oh what a kind of wisdom in your poetic words...... remain in relation with the Almighty.. then you will get the strength to make proper decisions.. thanku dear poet. for this fine poem and your noble thinking. tony

0 0 Reply
Elijah Timothy 30 August 2018

thank you very much Dr.Tony really appreciate the advice

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success