Fate Race Poem by Ribash Dotel

Fate Race

Rating: 4.3


Hello there!
I may not be the best but darling I'm trying so tough to be good enough for you,
I'm praying for my fate and my fate is preying on me, there's hole in my life that i cant sew.

I've seen you cry so hard on the corridor hiding your face,
Cherish our struggle my love, we sure will win the fate race.

I can't bring you diamond ring and platinum necklace,
I'm fine here alive with memories and numbing of my heart, restless.

We are on the boulevard of fate my love and we have more to suffer,
Step ahead with me, we'll proceed our story further.

I've got so much so say but I can't open my mouth,
Even after all these hindrances I'm alright with you. Can you please explain me how?

I don't have ample love and care, but I'm sure the love I got is more than enough for her,
Her love is irresistible that makes me brawny lad and evoke me never to surrender.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love story. We sure will win the fate race
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 31 May 2018

Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Well conceived and elegantly brought forth from the heart. Indeed, we must fight for our right to love. Thanks for sharing Ribash and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Ribash. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 May 2018

You may not be the best but you are trying to be the a good human being with love and care is great. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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