Father And Son Poem by Daniel Brick

Father And Son

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for Ryan

There was a time when you
were younger by far than you
can remember, a time when I
was always in front of you,
because EXPERIENCE, in its
total disregard for our human
frailty, came careening down
the hills and rushing up
the valleys of Time and WHAM!
hit us with all the force
of its necessity. Mostly,
the shock went over your head
because you were still small
in stature, giving Experience
little to strike. And I took
the brunt of it, in my face,
in my face, in my whole being,
because that is what fathers do.
Then the broken pieces of
Experience floated around us,
harmless, their velocity spent.
They were like bubbles and you
jumped up and walloped them
with all your strength...

It's different now, isn't it?
You stand at full stature,
facing everything Experience
has to offer. You are confident
of your strength. When Experience
strikes you with a full body blow,
you stand your ground, and watch
the broken pieces floating past you.
And you smile as you see those
defeated pieces coalesce
into the Time of Your Life.

Thursday, July 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: growing up,son
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 06 July 2017

And you smile as you see those defeated pieces coalesce into the Time of Your Life.... //.... Nicely articulated poem musing about the changes and maturity that comes with growing age. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

Ryan was small at that time. Still he can remember experiences gained in life. Because Ryan was still small in stature and giving experience was supposed little to strike. This was amazing truth. But time has changed and Ryan stands still in full stature. Smile of Ryan brings time for life. Such an affectionate son remains in mind of lovable father. Son grows up and father feels fragrance of life. May God bring happiness and fortune for Ryan. This is an excellent poem very well crafted and shared.....10

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Daniel Brick 06 July 2017

Thanks much for your sympathetic response to my poem. I wrote it for fathers and sons everywhere.

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