Father's Day Poem by Jeanette Telusma

Father's Day



You ought to be celebrated every day.
You deserve all glory and honor.
So great a model are you.
Day in and day out you take care of your own.
As birds of the air are taken care of,
So are we, you're children.
Happy Father's Day Dad.
I take this time to stop and bring recognition
Of who you are.
You are great, you are amazing.
As I am the apple of your eyes so are you to me.
I stand in awe of you.

Sunday, June 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fathers day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2017

You ought to be celebrated everyday! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2017

Nice presentation on Father's Day. I like the most lines are... As birds of the air are taken care of, So are we, you're children. Happy Father's Day Dad. Thanks for shring...10

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Jeanette Telusma 19 June 2017

Thank you for your kindness, blessings to you always.

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 June 2017

How the lines of this poem do help us to pronounce the words quickly and make a smooth reading? This poem has 73 monosyllabic words and 13 words with two or more syllables. The more number of monosyllabic words makes the reading melodious. The polysyllabic words which have consonant clusters with mute- liquid consonant combination are: celebrated, glory, and recognition, Apple, every. This combination helps to make quick pronunciation of these words. The liquid - mute combination of consonant which makes us to take a lot of time to pronounce the word is ' children'. So this poem enables the readers to be melodious and smooth in reading. Congrats to the poet.

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Jeanette Telusma 18 June 2017

Your time and comment is greatly appreciated. Blessings to you always and may you continue to be an inspiration.

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