Eindaray Kyaw

Rookie (8th Sep,1996 / Yangon)

Father's Hope - Poem by Eindaray Kyaw

Safe and sound, may you fly high
Go around, will you be far wide;

Taking your words can make me just relieve
'Coming back sooner', your words are pretty;

The Obvious in my mind is just to raise you up
And also, what I hope is just you come back;

I wonder why you don't feel homesick
Like your mother cries over spilled milk;

Despite being a strong man
Really hard to fight back tears come;

The 'Time', precious for you
But, expected by us
Has gone by...Correct?


Comments about Father's Hope by Eindaray Kyaw

  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/19/2012 7:06:00 AM)


    a very nice poem beautifully written by you dear...! i liked it very much and enjoyed very line!
    :)) Thumbs Up as I love my Father too! ! ! :) keep writing!
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  • Lyn Paul (8/25/2012 7:16:00 AM)


    A very precious reading and I enjoyed Live vs Land beautiful writing keep doing so, this will heal your big heart. (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (8/16/2012 11:38:00 PM)


    I wonder why you don't feel homesick, Like your mother cries over spilled milk, you know that sentence reflects me.Your words strike my secret heart.I've never felt homesick.But my mom always worry about me.I think I am hard-heart person.And you? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 28, 2012


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