gradually strolls on my soul
its fierce, harsh and cold
grasps ma heart squeezes out
hope that i hoped wud last out
sensation sent like m freezing inside
tide after tide, tide after tide
on the verge of suicide
my thoughts collide
its worse than the last i tried
strangling, stripped of placidness and hope
seems impossible to cope
confines ma behind ma limits
assassinates my soaring spirits
a voice cooes inside'my dear..
your experiencing a vivacious fear...'
This touched me. If a person has ever experianced simular feelings, they will appreciate it as well. I read your comment on the forum that you think your poems are childlike. I don't think they are. I like them very much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deep feelings of sadness expressed in good diction from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Abdul.