Fear Poem by Abdul Basit

Fear

Rating: 5.0


gradually strolls on my soul
its fierce, harsh and cold
grasps ma heart squeezes out
hope that i hoped wud last out
sensation sent like m freezing inside
tide after tide, tide after tide
on the verge of suicide
my thoughts collide
its worse than the last i tried
strangling, stripped of placidness and hope
seems impossible to cope
confines ma behind ma limits
assassinates my soaring spirits
a voice cooes inside'my dear..
your experiencing a vivacious fear...'

Wednesday, July 12, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 22 June 2018

Deep feelings of sadness expressed in good diction from the heart. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Abdul.

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Mellisa Smith 23 July 2006

This touched me. If a person has ever experianced simular feelings, they will appreciate it as well. I read your comment on the forum that you think your poems are childlike. I don't think they are. I like them very much.

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