Feel My Pain Poem by miranda gray

Feel My Pain

Rating: 4.9


I feel it on my skin, as it comes down.
It is wet and very cold, they call it rain.
Standing soaked in your yard, can you see me frown?
Why do you enjoy putting me through this pain?
I can see that you keep looking my way
Are you sorry for what you’ve done to me?
Why did your heart all of a sudden turn grey?
You were definitely not what you said you would be.
You were suppose to be my best friend…
It turned out you were only a foe.
Now we are fighting and almost at an end.
To you my pain is nothing but a show.
I don’t need you in my life anymore
I will forget you and close all the sores.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 20 April 2009

Great idea - NEW CHAPTER

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Lisa French 20 April 2009

Very powerful! Liked how you wrote this, good work! ! ! 10+

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