Feel Surprise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel Surprise

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River has experienced tiredness
It is seen in riverbed’s surface
The sand is shining but with heavy heart
How many years of toiling as an art

The rocks have rubbed belly
Gone with slow process already
The rain has taken heavy toll
The flow has made scare with painful call

Down the lane thee is river
It is water carrier
With all our treasure in water
The river has become holier

The end is in sight
It may be felt right
The bed may open
The sun will do magic with shine

The golden reflection may close eyes
You can not keep open despite attempt or tries
It has blessings from hot sun
It may make you run

Love thee message
The sacrifice is not in drainage
The sand sings the story
Just feel surprise and carry

Sunday, April 6, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2014

Very good r cheng1 minute ago To be honest, I love it very much.I have read it frequently and the rhyme is good. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2014

Perfect! Courtenney Mills4 minutes ago You give inject life in parts of nature most take for granted. Amazing work! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2014

The Load Robert Alicias3 minutes ago It's well done, my friend.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 April 2014

River has experienced tiredness It is seen in riverbed’s surface

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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