Feeling Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

Feeling

Rating: 5.0


soft fluffy shaggy
lies
so that you can hug feet
to muffle footsteps
to sit on
and even to lie down
to snuggle the cheek
to rest
so for every right away to tread
and perhaps the carpet
also feels

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dagmara Anna 19 February 2009

The straight and bright poem who very well is felt, like the soft carpet under feet. It is worthwhile reading.

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Barry A. Lanier 11 February 2009

the average poet writes about what others can see whereas the great poet writes about what other cannot

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