Naked Think

Feeling Of Love

God: Why are you alone and sad?
Human: I am in Love.
God: Do You love me or there is someone else?
Human: Why should i love you?
God: Because i have created you.
Human: You have created me but you have failed to feel me.
God: Gasps in silence...
Human: You did'nt felt me, you was bored and for the sake of your timepass you created humans!

Topic(s) of this poem: god, human, love, silence

Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 2, 2017

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/30/2017 12:06:00 PM)

    God: Gasps in silence...
    Human: You did'nt felt me, you was bored and for the sake of your timepass you created humans!

    interesting conversation between the Creator God and simple human beings....... love ur poem. tony

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  • Akhtar Jawad (5/23/2017 5:43:00 AM)

    We have no alternate but to trust in God, to love or to not is beyond our control. A thoughtful poem.

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (4/2/2017 1:55:00 PM)

    This is absolutely a new logic and a new philosophy about why God created human beings. There is some pain and some fun around it. Thank you, Dear Poet.

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    Naked Think(4/2/2017 2:08:00 PM)

    sir nothing new everything is old, only pain in love no fun
    thank you

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  • Jazib KamalviJazib Kamalvi (4/2/2017 6:52:00 AM)

    We should love God because God loves us more than 70 mothers. Thanks.

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    Naked Think(4/2/2017 10:35:00 AM)

    i am agree with you my big brother :)

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