Feeling Of Love Poem by Naked Think

Feeling Of Love

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God: Why are you alone and sad?
Human: I am in Love.
God: Do You love me or there is someone else?
Human: Why should i love you?
God: Because i have created you.
Human: You have created me but you have failed to feel me.
God: Gasps in silence...
Human: You did'nt felt me, you was bored and for the sake of your timepass you created humans!

Sunday, April 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god,human,love,silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2017

God: Gasps in silence... Human: You did'nt felt me, you was bored and for the sake of your timepass you created humans! interesting conversation between the Creator God and simple human beings....... love ur poem. tony

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Akhtar Jawad 23 May 2017

We have no alternate but to trust in God, to love or to not is beyond our control. A thoughtful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 02 April 2017

This is absolutely a new logic and a new philosophy about why God created human beings. There is some pain and some fun around it. Thank you, Dear Poet.

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Naked Think 02 April 2017

sir nothing new everything is old, only pain in love no fun thank you

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 April 2017

We should love God because God loves us more than 70 mothers. Thanks.

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Naked Think 02 April 2017

i am agree with you my big brother :)

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