.feeling Pity Of Myself... Comments

A stranger pauses, not to question your tears, only to remind you— this pain is not the end.

an extremely beautiful write with srtong emotions., as sad and dark poems are my most favorite i loved it..thanks 10+++++ and A++++ rgds asif

A quote from Dylan thomas. 'When one burns one's bridges, what a very nice fire it makes.'

when a stronger feeling is so deeply inside and we must to remove it from our blood... is a kind of suicide, , , you are right! thanks for the comment!

nice..Its a kind of suicide poems...keep it up

Wonderful :) Very good: D

Yeats said that good poetry is a “quarrel with the self” and the reader looks in our that argument through the window of the poem. I see this poem as sort of a quarrel, “sort of” because it sounds like the quarrel is already resolved. You see things clearly (feeling pity of myself.., I request God for sanity and autoestimate - good substitute - I need the strength to accept, I need the understanding and acceptance, I learned the lesson, etc.) and you know what you need even though you are feeling terrible (suspended in the emptiness/of the hollow thoughts/of understanding and drowned...suffocated/ I lose every kind of hope – very strong words) . You tell us exactly where you are at (not everyone who asks for help is really ready to receive it) . I do not get the sense of anguish, desperation, and hopelessness that you must have gone through to reach this point even though you allude to all of your inner turmoil.

This is quite a intresting piece, It must of took a considerable amount of time to scribe, representing a great out pour of emotion, Thank you for sharing, Vilma

'not everyone who asks for help is really ready to receive it ' Profound, thanks for sharing 10