Feeling Shared Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feeling Shared

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Feelings shared
Monday.15th April 2019

You feel heartened
when some dear one has called
you in the early morning
and makes the heart a skip bating

"Hi, so early you are awake"?
I was shaken
"No, it is for you so early"
"your time is at midnight" it is morning time here and I am ready

" easter here" holiday mood
I understood
she might be enjoying late night cool music
that joy is really unique

What about breakfast?
she was fast enough to enquire
Parothaa* stuff bread and daal* spicy grams
"I like it so much" she was in a good mood

why have we similar views?
only a few people match with our temperament
"God only knows" was her answer
it pleased me so much later

what binds us together?
I parried the question before her
why not you serve me your stuff?
"I would like to serve"she did burst into a laugh

It is God's willing
that we are we honestly talking
taking each other's care
and share the feelings

Hasmukh Mehta
Courtesy: Abstract art

Feeling Shared
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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