Vaibhav sagar

Rookie - 145 Points (24-031995 / Jamshedpur)

Feelings - Poem by Vaibhav sagar

When I Am Glad, You Are In My Smile…

When I Am Sad, You Are In My Tears…

When I Am Walking, You Are In My Steps…

When I Am Sleeping, You Are In My Dreams…

I Think These Are Special Feelings

If I Were An Artist, I Would Paint My Feelings…

If I Were A Poet, I Would Quote My Feelings…

But I Am An Ordinary Person
So I Just Say

I LOVE YOU! !
https: //breathlessboy.wordpress.com/2015/09/22/feelings/

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings, love


Comments about Feelings by Vaibhav sagar

  • Chinedu Dike (12/26/2015 4:52:00 PM)


    Beautiful romantic piece of poetry depicting the essence of love - a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned from the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Vaibhav. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Terry Craddock (12/9/2015 10:01:00 PM)


    The first seven lines especially shined, the seventh 'If I Were A Poet, I Would Quote My Feelings…' would read better as 'If I Were A Poet, I Would Write My Feelings…' and the ninth line as 'So I Will Just Say' :)

    Just my opinion, write and I will read :)
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  • Gajanan Mishra (12/9/2015 9:25:00 PM)


    beautiful, special feelings really, thanks. go on.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    Beatiful poem with wonderful rhyme and reasoning. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 9, 2015



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