Feelings Poem by RUDRAKSH SHARMA

Feelings

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when i see,
half of the moon,
i feel some bitter cold,
it make me feeel poor.

when someone make me fool,
in sooth,
i feel some rage,
and think how he make me fool.


As, when i see the sun,
the waves make feel like core,
and raises my level of sour.

As at last,
i want you to think of lotus,
because there is a feel of bogus.

Sunday, July 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I am happy that you have a genuine feeling about nature and its beauties. Nice work. Go on

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 December 2019

A very nice work! Keep it up!

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Rudraksh Sharma 15 December 2019

thanks very much sir

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Rudraksh Sharma 15 December 2019

thank you very much sir

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Sehdev Sharma 27 July 2019

GREAT GOING DEAR..IT WAS A GOOD POEM..

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Sehdev Sharma 08 July 2019

Good attempt...but check your spellings before uploading...Rudra

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Rudraksh Sharma. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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